I couldn't
make myself
resist you,
nor did I really
want to miss
laughing eyes,
smiling promise
into my heart,
your strength
oozing charisma
on my resolve,
practiced caresses
lighting fires,
desires
Too much
for this young heart
so I took
that first bite
and fell.
This is a magpie tale.
23 comments:
Ah, that powerful first bite!
How very yummy .....
and one bite is all it took...smiles. nice mag tina!
super beautiful bite..
masterfully done!
My Magpie
sensual and beautiful. Sometimes falling is the best thing to do. great magpie
So, the prompt was the photo?
Forgive me I am slow. Drape shopping has dulled my brain...
Think twice before that first bite. :-)
mmmmm hmmmm :)
Its all downhill after the first bite! Great write
The first fall is a long one. Nice work!
Fantastic. Whether metamorphical, or real, it is a fabulous story.
Double posting - award for you on my blog.... finally!
... the finally means, that I was intending to give that Award to you for like forever!!!
Nice writing! :-)
I can't seem to send you a mail, so here is my reply from the Burrower Blog-
Tina- didn't know you were a Potter buff too. And I think I can make a calculated guess what the two of you disagreed on.
Thank you for your comments on the story- it is one of my favourites, though when I now read it, I can see all the flaws I never even noticed then.
Molly's kids and Hermione were two of the contenders. Lily Evans was a third (her mother was the daughter), and Colin Cheevy's mother was the third - there must be some reason both brothers were born magical.
Masterful.
ONe bite and you're a goner! Nice Magpie!
Oh this makes me want to fall too!
Wow, what a great image with so few words...amazing! Thanks for stopping by my blog.
You painted a great picture...and then paired your work with one!!
The first bite has all the surrender in it... Fancy magpie :)
love this - surrendering to the bite..that resistance - what resistance when it is such sweet tempation....Great Magpie...bkm
Now now now... temptation always gets the better of us...does it not?!
Well written, Tina!! I loved the way you started the poem, and then the progression was too good!!
That first bite... (sigh)
Super Mag!
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