I'm not here today BECAUSE THE FIRST STORY I SOLD IS PUBLISHED! I'm at the online magazine “lit”, one of Briane Pagel's blogs. He pays for stories.
I'd REALLY appreciate your feedback in the comments there. It's only my second short story and I'd like your honest opinion.
P.S The characters and events in this story are fictional. Any resemblance to real persons is purely coincidental. Actually, the idea came from a creepy dream I had. The idea. Not the story.