Life, long lived,
shows it's journey
everywhere
on the outside
(but you can't see my inside)
my body, decaying
my nerves, fraying
Frustrated
stressed
and
disabled
I crawl
Try to reach
“Onedayatatime”
As if...
And then I'm still here
And you're still there
And the tracks of your words
Are rust on my soul
This is a magpie tale.
Hello Friends,
I'm back from vacation and having a hard time swimming in the pool of real life as opposed to the surreal reality which is a cruise. Will blog about that later. Meanwhile, didn't want to miss a Magpie. So many great, inspirational writers on this meme.
9 comments:
"...the tracks of your words are rust on my soul"
Beautiful. Welcome back!
those last 2 lines rock this whole thing...made me think of 'tracks of my tears'...glad you are back! cant wait to hear all about it...
Excellent...and yes, the last two lines are awesome, they resonate with me as well as many others, I am sure.
Oh yes, life's journey certainly shows on the outside! Nicely done.
Oh my my!! These words just lingered on in my head...
Beautiful!!!
Hope you had a fabulous cruise.. It's great to have you back at Mag!!! :)
Geez. You should go away all the time. If this is the result of your brain being defragged. Wow.
OK, that's not true.
Your writing is always sublime.
Absolutely brilliant return from cruise into reality.
And the tracks of your words
Are rust on my soul
What a mine of information this short phrase contains...
Oh, Tina, I echo the comments. Absolutely brilliant!
Can't wait to read more of your magpie tales.
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