He'll always be
A persistent ache,
though the ragged edge
has healed,
one tiny sliver
at a time.
Like a stone,
caressed by
incessant waves,
whose edges get
smooth, over time.
Now, when she allows
the memories,
they're an embrace,
not the stab of regret
that used to come.
Wistful, she can still see
his gaze
hungry eyes
feel the giddy leap
of her young heart.
Again, warm hands,
mapping the lines and curves
of her body,
the long
s l o w
kisses
which left her
dizzy,
scrambled
and
reaching for more.
She sighs.
They once
loved
big,
powerful
and
forbidden
no thought to resisting.
But now
Does he sit there like this,
In a rumpled bed
Alone,
and remembering?
This is a magpie tale.
21 comments:
Who hasn't felt at least some of this?
Lovely . . . and universal.
Oh yes! Beautiful and wise words. :)
Oh man!! this was a very tender and touching story... And you've said it so beautifully in a poem!
Aah.. lost memories.. (sigh)
Towards the end, it really was very moving..
such beautiful words - touching and sad..hope he remembers..
Surely things we've all wondered - excellent!
Your Magpie could have been lived by me. Beautifully written.
such a sad place...there in am empty bed...cold where passion once blazed...
melancholy memories. nothing worse than cold, rumpled sheets. beautiful.
I can relate all too well.
Oh, beautiful, bittersweet, poignant. You are a lovely writer.
Lovely bittersweet poem!
P.S. I think he doesn't give a damn...
Universal (to those who have loved and lost) and beautifully written. I agree with Zulu. Of course he isn't sitting there alone and remebering, the bastard!
Ah yes I agree, a bittersweet tale beautifully told!
Nice. Love the photo.
Beautiful story, well told. I am sure everyone felt this way at least a couple of times- or at least, I hope so.
I think so many can relate to this beautiful and sad poem. Wonderful writing...look forward to more! :-)
Very nicely done!
Great poem. Full of joy and pain and longing. I hope you don't mind me saying this but I'm not sure it needed the last four lines. You seem to have already said it all.
The last four lines tells me she wishes that he were alone and feeling what she is feeling
but we all know he isn't
I like your writing very much
Amazing poem, such powerful feeling and so erotic. Great job.
Cee
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