I wish I could wash
you out,
forget it
finally
Not be haunted by
what-ifs
regrets
you would go
down
the
drain,
in
drain,
in
a gentle trickle,
like the soap suds
puddled at my feet
Because moments
sneak up on my resolve
hushly whispering
to my heart
if only...
reminding me
of what was
long-ago lost.
It's Flash Friday 55. Head over to g-man and put your link in the comments if you want to join us.
11 comments:
Yes, it would be wonderful when you were done with grieving the loss of someone or something that you could just wash it down the drain...great images created with this 55!
oh i think many can relate to this one...nice touch on the soap suds...
oh now that is good. this is really, really good! I enjoyed this very much! Beautiful font choice by the way and beautiful blog!
Yeah, the if-onlys are hard to take. I love the imagery in this.
Blogger Ate My Comment!!!
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
Anyway...Loved your 55
Are you still carrying a torch?
This had such a beautiful flow..Wonderful Writing...
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
So hard to let go and move on. Great 55.
The "what ifs" and "should have beens" need to be washed out of all our lives! Great one, Tina!
And don't we carry around so many regrets :(
Perfect, relate-able. That being said, there will always be those haunting moments...even decades from now. It's a woman thing.
Love this one (as always)!
The if onlys and what ifs keep us on the edge of the possibilities
Beautiful poetry
Moon Smiles
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