Friday, December 17, 2010

Flash Friday 55: Down the Drain

I wish I could wash
you out,
forget it
Not be haunted by
you would go
a gentle trickle,
like the soap suds
puddled at my feet

Because moments
sneak up on my resolve
hushly whispering
to my heart
if only...
reminding me
of what was
long-ago lost.

It's Flash Friday 55.  Head over to g-man and put your link in the comments if you want to join us.


drybottomgirl said...

Yes, it would be wonderful when you were done with grieving the loss of someone or something that you could just wash it down the drain...great images created with this 55!

Brian Miller said...

oh i think many can relate to this one...nice touch on the soap suds...

sheila said...

oh now that is good. this is really, really good! I enjoyed this very much! Beautiful font choice by the way and beautiful blog!

Alice Audrey said...

Yeah, the if-onlys are hard to take. I love the imagery in this.

G-Man said...

Blogger Ate My Comment!!!
Anyway...Loved your 55
Are you still carrying a torch?
This had such a beautiful flow..Wonderful Writing...
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Monkey Man said...

So hard to let go and move on. Great 55.

5thsister said...

The "what ifs" and "should have beens" need to be washed out of all our lives! Great one, Tina!

H said...

And don't we carry around so many regrets :(

My name is PJ. said...

Perfect, relate-able. That being said, there will always be those haunting moments...even decades from now. It's a woman thing.

Rocky Mountain Woman said...

Love this one (as always)!

moondustwriter said...

The if onlys and what ifs keep us on the edge of the possibilities

Beautiful poetry

Moon Smiles