tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8914384080646206545.post6280685880998849134..comments2023-11-02T02:46:54.900-06:00Comments on Life is Good: Deep Cover, Shallow GravesJeremy [Retro]http://www.blogger.com/profile/09912258155288958827noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8914384080646206545.post-14976208723509723042011-06-20T02:36:53.398-06:002011-06-20T02:36:53.398-06:00Thanks for sharing, Tina! That's wonderful!
I ...Thanks for sharing, Tina! That's wonderful!<br />I enjoyed the visit. :)Sweet Lilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04613556729394471187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8914384080646206545.post-74496907447127572912011-06-18T13:01:38.332-06:002011-06-18T13:01:38.332-06:00So glad I found you, this is wonderful. Dropping b...So glad I found you, this is wonderful. Dropping by from Julie's A-Z blog hop, nice to meet you.Langley Cornwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02064219496272043638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8914384080646206545.post-16273668773314097532011-06-15T05:19:52.145-06:002011-06-15T05:19:52.145-06:00Wow! I really enjoyed this, Tina. Can't wait t...Wow! I really enjoyed this, Tina. Can't wait to read more!Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8914384080646206545.post-59198301539684577222011-06-14T15:02:15.289-06:002011-06-14T15:02:15.289-06:00Hi Tina - greetings from another A-Zrs, followed y...Hi Tina - greetings from another A-Zrs, followed you from a link on Warrior Muse's site.<br /><br />You spit words quite well, for a first draft. Keep going, keep going, edit later. :-)Beverly Diehlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00392288953821757887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8914384080646206545.post-64643611989023059192011-06-13T09:33:54.676-06:002011-06-13T09:33:54.676-06:00nice...like that you are playing in present tense....nice...like that you are playing in present tense...nice continuation...there are things i think you will see in your editing...the repitition of dark clad man in the opening is a bit weak...look for synonyms....i like this though...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8914384080646206545.post-89317278984850100262011-06-12T15:59:31.314-06:002011-06-12T15:59:31.314-06:00Good to see the story continuing. I think I need t...Good to see the story continuing. I think I need to go back and read from the beginning though. I've forgotten bits. I'll look forward to what comes next :)Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13357761230206692089noreply@blogger.com